tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4310296103264834063.post1711996684343957565..comments2015-10-16T10:20:04.209-05:00Comments on Bethany Ediger: NA Project 4: Detailed Narrative 2-Kibera TV: Fold-Out HistoryBethany Edigerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02055532364642099120noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4310296103264834063.post-6667119336220364602010-09-26T09:51:54.732-05:002010-09-26T09:51:54.732-05:00here is how i'm reading these as a first react...here is how i'm reading these as a first reaction:<br /><br />top: the A is falling. why?<br /><br />middle: looks like a kid's block. not sure what that has to do with local news. <br /><br />bottom: t.v. that covers the city, or is about the city. a good idea, but i don't think their city looks like that. maybe in the central business district (?). <br /><br />since this is not a primary project, but something that will be used as content in a project, i would suggest finding the most important and simple idea to visualize. that way you can wrap it up without too much headache. right now, the third concept is the most clear or appropriate, but i don't think it's shown in quite the right way. how all might you be able to simply visualize the idea of kibera t.v. covering the city, or reporting on the city, or similar?thenewprogrammehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08946645529931768389noreply@blogger.com