tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4310296103264834063.post4173369585615099740..comments2015-10-16T10:20:04.209-05:00Comments on Bethany Ediger: Change One Thing: RevisionsBethany Edigerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02055532364642099120noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4310296103264834063.post-38122646621403941732010-02-13T19:54:26.520-06:002010-02-13T19:54:26.520-06:00suggest version 2 with white background. make the ...suggest version 2 with white background. make the "call-out" text all the same size/color and smaller...make the url green like u have, but the same size as the other call-outs. small steps big difference instead of small steps one big difference? reads as 1 big difference small steps now. maybe lose small steps altogether? difference should be smaller. good concept— i hate giving advice/critiquing via blogs.Kidwell at 63-11https://www.blogger.com/profile/13870816611234296967noreply@blogger.com