Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Final Haiku Marks

Here are my final marks for:
Dewdrops, Let Me Cleanse
In Your Brief Sweet Waters
These Dark Hands of Life
I adjusted the "refresh" (middle) mark in order to stay congruent with the other two. I am still debating whether or not the manipulation is necessary or if the original black would suffice and have a better quality. In addition to this, I did more iterations of my "hand" (bottom) mark with the ink used in the other two marks.
Shown below: Corrected "Refresh" (middle) along with original mark without manipulation.

1 comment:

  1. The 3rd shape is quite strong.

    Try a few more iterations for that middle shape - it is flat and lacking the texture and tonal qualities of the other two.