These are not at all where I want them to be but I am having difficulty troubleshooting the problem. Input would really be appreciated. I want to show the concept of the "fruitburger" (ideally by showing the whole image or one where it is recognizable). The critique on Friday referred me back to a basic arrangement that I had tried in the first round of iterations. These are screen shots of my works-in-progress. Help!
i think the versions you posted on feb 12 are potentially more compelling? see my post.
ReplyDeleteI really think the lower right version communicates with the most immediacy, one of the main tasks in poster design. The apple feels a bit crowded. Try reducing the scale a bit. Big Difference could be all green and, maybe, bolder. "Visit" is unnecessary at the bottom.
ReplyDeleteIf you want to work on the framed version, it should be a part of the lower band in the dark grey, there's to much going on at the bottom. The small copy could come out of the frame into the image field.